I Made a Build Order. Need advice on improving it.

First of all let me just say I am in no way an expert on making BOs. I just felt like it, it’s a full wall into 28+2 pop fc into gg. If any of you know how I could improve this so that it doesn’t transition into gg, that would be greatly appreciated. (Also side note, I’m u/smoothie_owo but on a different account, I got a new iPhone 11 and forgot my account password) Here’s the BO:

6 on sheep

4 on Wood

1 Lures Boar

1 Builds a house then goes onto wood

4 on Berries

Lure 2nd Boar with TC vil

2 vils begin to wall

2 on Boar/Sheep, 2 on Boar/Sheep -> Farms

+1 vil to walling

+1 on farm

+2 on Wood (walling vils to to Wood when finished)

3 on Gold

Loom + Click Feudal

 -=Before Feudal=- 

Vils on Sheep go to Farms

 -=Feudal Age=- 

+2 on Wood

Make Market and Blacksmith

Click Castle