Would anyone be willing to view a VOD for me and give me some advice

Hi :)

Im a 1150-1250 player on DE and am really looking to improve my game.
Something I have noticed watching my own recs is that I tend to throw games I should in theory have in the bag.
Last night I threw a game on Cross (Four Lakes) where I owned three of the ponds...

I was wondering if anyone would be willing to watch the game and tell me where I could improve and what I did poorly, and if said person also wants to tell me how to upload vods that would also be appreciated 11

Thanks in advance :)